march 13 and 14 - an r30 production. the ramayana.

im feeling poetic.

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"gone"

so you look at her
with desire, intense, heating
under the sun, you stand
for ages, waiting, growing, fading
with the wind, you sway
along with grace, oppurtune, never
because you are tied. closed
doors are barriers, steel cold walls
bar you, the desire
fades away into the wind, gone is
the oppurtune moment. end.

"shooting star"

yes, extremely poetic. haha.
there is somewhat a structure in this poem.
(hint: line by line) haha.

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